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Monday, October 19, 2009

my poetry dont luagh please!!

fall

little birds spot the trees
almost replacing all the leaves

apples turning plump and read
feild animals eyes are filled with dread

snow is soon to fall
but we cannot have it all

children scamper throught the fallen
leaves and branches
haystacks fill all the ranches

oh it fall, oh its fall
well we cant merily have it all its
fall




closed eyes


with my eyes closed i can see it all
go anywere
without a care
i can share my
wishes
hopes
and dreams
to whom it means

im the queen of my own land
i know were i stand
i can tuck my feet in the sand
wind blowing
ocean hushing

with my eyes closed i can see it all go any were
without a care
i can share my
hopes
wish
and dreams
to whom it means

3 comments:

  1. oh my gawwwsh... hannah!!!! this is so good!!!!! you have to like make ur own little book thingyy!!!!! i liked closed eyes because like it was really interesting and cool, but really... REAL!! like, no joke, it was amazing, u really like poetry... SEND IT TO LIKE A FAMOUS WRITER OR SOMETHING!!!!

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